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Wednesday, 10 May 2017

Goldilocks and the Three Bears - My Spin

Once upon a time, there lived a girl named Ellie she was only 10 years old she lived with her mum and dad she doesn't have any brothers or sisters.
When she ask her mum she said can I go to the forest to feed the ducks at the pond. When Ellie went to the pond she didn’t saw the ducks in the pond she said where would I find the ducks when she heard the duck’s yelling she sawed them all up on the trees. When she waited 2 minutes she got so tired she went back to her house. When she came back to the pond the duck’s was already there in the pond.
The duck’s was trying to talk to Ellie but they couldn't because Ellie couldn’t understand them. When it was midnight Ellie went back home to rest the next morning she came back to the pond she sawed blood over the tree she thought someone ate the duck’s when she sawed something big and orange it was a wolf the wolf ate the duck’s when she went home yesterday at midnight. She forgot that she went home.
That day Ellie’s mum and dad sawed the blood around the tree and they called the wolf catcher when the catcher came they took the wolf and they live happily ever after the end.
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1 comment:

  1. Great writing but u can replace sawed with saw

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