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Monday 18 November 2019

Rozaidah writing wk5

On a fine sunny day, Lizzy woke up and she got ready for school. So Lizzy ate breakfast which was pancake, and a English breakfast, which was toast, baked beans, salad, eggs, and 8 sausages. The last thing that Lizzy did was she checked the weather forecast and it said it will be sunny the whole day. But when Lizzy was near school it just randomly started raining. she said to herself that checked the weather forecast carefully in the morning. It said that it will be sunny the whole day.

So Lizzy ran to school so fast that she could even win the Olympic running event. She got to her class and all her classmates were all dry but not Lizzy, she was soaking wet like she came out of the shower with her clothes on, and didn’t dry herself. she felt so depressed that it just randomly rained like hell.

Lizzy’s teacher was nice enough to go and buy her some clothes to wear so she wouldn't be sick. When her teacher came back she gave her the clothes and Lizzy quickly got changed in the bathroom, when Lizzy came back she felt so dry and comfortable and happy.

Lizzy’s teacher asked her if the clothes were alright with her clothes and she said yes.She said it fits her really well, her teacher opened a sporting event Lizzy and her whole class watched it. Till the end of school and the rain stopped. Lizzy was happy that she won’t get wet anymore, so the bell rings and we all went home and had an awesome day.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Rozaidah!
    You have really let your imagination run wild in this story! I like how you have been able to use the image of kids in a classroom to come up with an original narrative. Thank you for reading your story out in class (twice) this week! Do you think Lizzy needs to get an umbrella or even a coat to take to school just in case it rains again?

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